now we were just me and Luke to believe in the film. Yet Don Michael III, though it seems, is well advanced. We shot about 67% of the film and I think we have gone too far to throw away all the work done so far. The problem is not only the absence of Philip but also the desire that had declined significantly from June so that now the film could really to be canceled. If this happens would obviously be a big disappointment but the rest would also be the most likely choice. I write in this post that I modified to go ahead with the shoot:
Scene XII: Claudius and Eduardo are in a room adjacent to where Joe is. Eduardo Claudius asks why they are doing this and it starts to tell.
Scene XII (not Philip) is framed Claudius while thinking in another room. The thought of Claudius is heard by the audience (as in all movies) and begins the scene with Marcus and Don Michele twenty years earlier. Maybe you could slow down the movement of Claudius and so think the scene would have more effect.
Scene XV: Claudius leaves the room where he was. Start talking with Joe and with little effort can convince him. We should be doing close-ups of Joe and Claudius. In this way the environment would not be resumed and the time at which betrays Joe Don Michael would have a greater effect.
Scene XVII: Claudius back to the previous room with Joe and explained his plan. These changes seem silly place. We should justify them in some way (perhaps because of the danger of a raid by Don Michael in the room).
XX Scene: In the room an alarm sounds. We provide bodyguards Claudius (Mobsters important is fitted) that after being warned by a speaker to run the tunnel in search of the intruder. The guards in this case we'd all be dressed up (except for one that will take).
Scene XXI: Don Michael and Frank are in the galleries. While wandering are intercepted by bodyguards of Claudius. Start a fight but Frank tells Don Michele to go ahead alone and that he would obtain at the end of the battle. Don Michael thinks for a bit 'and then again in the direction of Claudius.
Scene XXII : Claudius is surprised by the speed with which Don Michael found him and runs away with Joe to the tunnel. The two are not running away but they're going Don Michele to strike at the right time in the galleries. But Don Michael is faster and after seeing Claudius shun the gun from behind told him to stop. Claudius and Joe turned and started talking. Don Michael accuses Claudius reminding him that if his father had sought and asked him to leave Joe. But then note that Joe is loose and covers the situation. Claudius proposes to adjust the matter out.
Scene XXIII: The three find themselves in a patch of grass outside. It is now night and the place chosen by Claudius to the combat is lit only by the dim light of a lamp post. Claudius and his new friend get ready. The meeting is about to begin when Claudius heard something cold in the head. And 'Joe! Don Michael is relieved from that brave. It 's the first time that Joe saved his life. Sure of victory approaches to take over the enemy with equal speed when Claudius grabs Joe's gun and held it against the tip. Don Michael Claudius threat but he knows that doing so does not avenge his father ever. If you kill Joe, Don Michael would kill him in retaliation for a new assistant and would still, as he had with his father. So Joe throws himself on the ground and runs through the corridors. Don Michael and Joe start chasing and shooting but Claudius escapes after putting in motion a motor part and disappears from their sight.
Scene XXIV : Don Michael is angry about the failure but is also happy to have found Joe. The sun is rising and they decide to return home. As they walk they were joined by Frank, wounded but alive. They decide to take revenge for that insult, and together they return to nest.
END
This new finish is very similar to that of Luke. Only change a few things. Remains a problem. Where is Eduardo? Why did not follow Claudius and Joe? Its intervention would reverse the situation and probably Don Michael would be dead. This is only my proposal and as I already said it will decide what to do with Luke.
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